Confusing handles

Which is the better formulation:

These changes being introduced by EO 364 not only jeopardizes the function of the NCIP as an independent commission. The President also renounces her responsibility assigned to her by RA 8371.

or

In these changes being introduced by EO 364, not only is the function of the NCIP jeopardized. The direct responsibility of the President over the IP ancestral concerns, as mandated by the RA 8371, is also renounced.

The first case uses confusing handles as far as the use of the not-only-but-also device is concerned. The first sentence implies that the device should belong to “these changes”. But the intention is infringed upon by the second sentence, which subject snatches the but also part of the device.

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