Where predicate is lilliputian to Gulliver subject

Which is the better formulation:

Pushing for such a measure in a situation where even the agrarian reform beneficiaries allegedly owning their lands do not have guaranteed access to government’s credit facilities and support services as mandated by CARP is untimely.

or

Pushing for such a measure is untimely given the situation where even the agrarian reform beneficiaries allegedly owning their lands do not have guaranteed access to government’s credit facilities and support services as mandated by CARP.

In the first case, the predicate is a lilliputian; the subject, Gulliver. It is like the Gulliver is too hefty a burden for the lilliputian—she will eventually die.

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